Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go
Okay...so...i triad...and i quit...sorry...but what the hell kinda stupid start is thst?! I was bired just reading it...mc is stupid talking about house age and hiw hes a nobody and has no girls and useing the bathroom on my time? The hell is wrong with you? You think i give a damn about his sorry loser boring ass? Okay its not that serious but you see where im going with this? You dont start a game by boring the player to the point of deleting the game...its so freaking boring!!! So yeah best of luck i guess i dont wanna go through that much time of boredom got way better games to play.
Hi! I don’t share your view that people living in rural areas are losers. But anyway, thanks for trying out the game. Have a great day and Happy New Year!
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped
Oof, because you are already at the ²-³ gig range on the apk I'll leave my usual post.
You probably want to cut some of the older content off as an RPA to download separately from the core apk with the newest content in it. This will allow only periodic rpa interaction from both you and from the android users, retaining the apk for the bulk of the updates.
Both methods stink and I've given up trying both because of those problems with every game. I bought this as part of the Winter Bundle, and I expect to be able to get it. Other developers seem to be capable of having it download straight from itch, do the same!
I enjoyed this game, at the start of the game I thought Charlie was gay, and I didn't like how he had muscles but from some angles he would look very skinny, but those problems quickly went away. I wasn't a big fan of Tony and Adam I believe, they looked weird. I love all the characters in the story, except Charlie, he's just the cliche Main Character that everyone gets along with even though he isn't doing anything special, throughout the game they act like he brightens the room when he seems really introverted to me. He doesn't have any special qualities besides being from a village, I didn't really see his charisma firsthand, but I can deal with it. I fell in love with the game the moment I saw Patricia, a beautiful character design and a woman I would date in real life. I hope there won't be too many 'Old Incompetent' men, since that seems to be a trend in AVN's as a way to make the protagonist shine, I assume, but overall, the story is okay and the plot is amazing to me.
Hi dev, I just played the new update and want tell you that I really enjoyed it but I would like to ask. Is ntr one of your plans?(I hope not) I just based it in the new update. I would just like to clarify before I commit fully to the game but either way I still hope for your game to be more successful
Hey Dev, I was just playing ur new update. And I find many problems so I decided to let u know what are those.
Like this, I was actually playing the game in english and this language suddenly came, and it's not the only time, u know there a new scene or image add in galary notification on the top left corner in this game, it also sometime change language.
Like this.
And sometimes the dialogue actually change bt the name doesn't.
Like in this scene the blonde girl actually talking bt it shows the mc's name.
There's some prblm like this, so if u kindly look into it.
Hey Dev, I just started playing ur game. Cuz it's giving me a vibe that it's gonna be awesome. The 1st look is so beautiful that I'm dying to try it. Bt after I just start playing it, I see there's a prblm u might wanna fix, that's why I'm writing it instead of playing. Add 'textbox transparency' in the game prefs. I'm saying that from my 3 years of experience of playing this type of game, and I bet it'll gonna enhance our playing experience and be less annoying while reading. So, many players are gonna try ur game. And if I find any prblm while playing the game, I'll let u know so u can fix it.
Bye Dev, thanks for reading my comment, and please fix those prblms in the future updates.
Thanks for the heads-up! The new update is live in early access for Patreon supporters and will be available to everyone else tomorrow. I didn’t manage to fix the transparency issue with the text box this time, but I’ll make sure to address it in the next update.
I've found another prblm and that is about the animation part..... I don't know about the pc version one cuz I didn't play it on my pc, bt in the android version sometime the animated part of the game get glitch and the animation didn't go smoothly. Like when the mc and patricia have sex at that time game get glitch idk if it's just my phone or the game, bt I cleared my phn ram and played it again and it still get glitched.
So, I kindly ask u to check if there's a prblm.
If u don't find any prblm then that is my fault, and I'm sorry for wasting ur time.
And if u find any prblm then I'll be really greatful if u can fix it.
Thanks for the post! You’re probably right — I should look into lowering the quality of the animations and images for the Android version. It seems like the lag with the animations is definitely an issue. I’ll work on getting this fixed in the next updates. Appreciate you bringing it up!
There's a new update available! I’ve added a feature that lets you adjust the transparency of the textbox. Thanks for pointing that out! You can check out the new update now.
Also I wanted to ask is there anyway to find the music used in this game? Some of the rock and metal tracks were pretty nice and I would like to know what they are called.
Alright I have now finished the game and I must say, I totally understand all the support for this game. Especially for the developers first game it's fucking good. The jokes are on point and actually funny. The animations and Character models all look fantastic and there's also just so many nice details like references to other games or later on references to movies and it's all animated. Not just pictures but the developer actually put time to animate all of it. And I love it. The end for right now was super confusing and I don't really get why our character did it, I still feel like it was just his imagination but if not then we might be playing a psycho killer.
Thanks for your comment, it's a pleasure. There is a new update coming out soon (first for patreon subscribers), the animations are even better there in my opinion.
One thing I can complain about already is... WHY on Mega? I can already see how I have to download the files/updates from another website because Mega sucks ass and they want you to use their shitty app. Please if possible upload the updates to another platform that doesn't have a stupid low limit. It's gonna make things easyer in the future.
I think I have not used that yet because probably no one provides it. But the times when Mega didn't work because of the file size limit I went to other websites to download the file from there instead of using he stupid mega app. And often times they used Work upload, or Anomous files I think it was called and a bunch of other. And it always worked there doesn't really seem to be a size limit and u don't have to pay as user to download the files. I don't know it's your choice but I really dislike mega.
Also to everyone reading this add other Download websites if u want. I know I have used some other good ones aswell but I can't think of their name right now. Me stupid
I mean I'll give it a try if anyone ever uploads their file on there. But I have only once seen a developer use something else then Mega on itch. Usualy everyone just uses Mega.
I randomly stumbled upon this game and I am so glad that I did. I was worried about how you would introduce and develop the places outside the village, and I have to say you handled the transition really well.
I especially loved how you managed to convey the doubts and uncertainty of the MC when stepping out of his comfort zone.
On the section labeled as "Download", the files do show the label "External". Games can be installed in-app if the files are uploaded to Itch.io rather than an external source such as MEGA.
Yo, game dev! Don't let the negativity from NTR critics discourage you. Focus on creating the game you truly want to make. As long as you're putting in love, passion, and careful thought, the outcome will speak for itself. If you decide to include NTR in your game, just make sure it serves a meaningful purpose and isn't added for the sake of shock value.
I see potential in this project and I'm eager to see how it evolves. While I’ll wait for more improvements before playing it again, you have my support. I'll check back next year to see how things have progressed. Keep up the good work! 😁
Выглядит довольно интересно. Не сказать что игра слишком детская, или наоборот серьёзная. Просто дружеская атмосфера у игры. В плане графики очень хорошо выглядит, что освещение, и тени хорошо сочитаются. Сам сюжет про деревенского паренька в городе тоже интересный. В общем жду продолжения...
Just played it and see potential! The Graphic is really good, animation are good and even thought some backgrounds are lower quality then the protagonist, it all fits well together.
Ты вроде из России я изучаю русский язык смешивать гарем и нтр довольно плохая идея тебе придется делать практически две игры с равноценым содержанием и будет много говна лететь в твою сторону
Amalia(father's woman) will not be a sexual interest for MC. There will be no hints of incest in the game. Such content is blocked on Patreon. The harem will be with the girls shown on the page banner and in addition to them there will still be secondary women with whom the protagonist can have sex with if the player wishes.
Thank you for the question. There are plans for a harem in the future for now. The other tags you listed are not planned for now, but I may change my plans.
hmmm.. make an announcement when you absolutely rule out futa and NTR and then i might try the game.. i, like the majority of AVN players, are not here to be made mockery of. nice renders, but content>renders
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is there any consequences to your choices cause i slapped that bald guy but i wanna avoid any possible rape if thats in the game im hoping it isnt
there will be no rape in the game.
okay thank you
great game! keep it up dev!
Thanks so much for your comment and for playing the game❤️
Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go
Okay...so...i triad...and i quit...sorry...but what the hell kinda stupid start is thst?! I was bired just reading it...mc is stupid talking about house age and hiw hes a nobody and has no girls and useing the bathroom on my time? The hell is wrong with you? You think i give a damn about his sorry loser boring ass? Okay its not that serious but you see where im going with this? You dont start a game by boring the player to the point of deleting the game...its so freaking boring!!! So yeah best of luck i guess i dont wanna go through that much time of boredom got way better games to play.
Hi! I don’t share your view that people living in rural areas are losers. But anyway, thanks for trying out the game. Have a great day and Happy New Year!
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped
thank you! You summerised it perfectly and sorry not good at spelling English is my 2nd language
well I suggest powering through until chapter 2 it gets pretty good we get to know the main character better he's actually likeable in my opinion
alright I'll try
Oof, because you are already at the ²-³ gig range on the apk I'll leave my usual post.
You probably want to cut some of the older content off as an RPA to download separately from the core apk with the newest content in it. This will allow only periodic rpa interaction from both you and from the android users, retaining the apk for the bulk of the updates.
Amei o jogo tô esperando as próximas atualizações
have Chinese？
很遗憾，目前还没有翻译，也许将来我会考虑翻译，或者会有其他人愿意帮助翻译。
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
ok
你是一个很棒的作者，加油。
另外，这个游戏应该不会有ntr吧？
Ntr's not in the game
any chance you would do a mediafile download? google drive says no more downloads due to capacity and Mega capped at 1.9gbs before it closed out
Hi, did you want to download the PC version?
Yes, Im trying to download to pc
Both methods stink and I've given up trying both because of those problems with every game. I bought this as part of the Winter Bundle, and I expect to be able to get it. Other developers seem to be capable of having it download straight from itch, do the same!
I enjoyed this game, at the start of the game I thought Charlie was gay, and I didn't like how he had muscles but from some angles he would look very skinny, but those problems quickly went away. I wasn't a big fan of Tony and Adam I believe, they looked weird. I love all the characters in the story, except Charlie, he's just the cliche Main Character that everyone gets along with even though he isn't doing anything special, throughout the game they act like he brightens the room when he seems really introverted to me. He doesn't have any special qualities besides being from a village, I didn't really see his charisma firsthand, but I can deal with it. I fell in love with the game the moment I saw Patricia, a beautiful character design and a woman I would date in real life. I hope there won't be too many 'Old Incompetent' men, since that seems to be a trend in AVN's as a way to make the protagonist shine, I assume, but overall, the story is okay and the plot is amazing to me.
Thank you so much. Have a great day!
Hi dev, I just played the new update and want tell you that I really enjoyed it but I would like to ask. Is ntr one of your plans?(I hope not) I just based it in the new update. I would just like to clarify before I commit fully to the game but either way I still hope for your game to be more successful
Hi! Thanks so much for deciding to play my game. And no, I’m not planning to include NTR at all
I'm glad. I'll fully support this game now. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update
Hey Dev, I was just playing ur new update. And I find many problems so I decided to let u know what are those.
Like this, I was actually playing the game in english and this language suddenly came, and it's not the only time, u know there a new scene or image add in galary notification on the top left corner in this game, it also sometime change language.
Like this.
And sometimes the dialogue actually change bt the name doesn't.
Like in this scene the blonde girl actually talking bt it shows the mc's name.
There's some prblm like this, so if u kindly look into it.
Thank you very much, I will fix it soon
will harem be avoidable? i prefer li path choices. also will pregnancy be involved eventually?
It will be possible to avoid relationships with some girls. No pregnancy is planned
so your saying only some are avoidable so its not a matter of solo multiple choice LI routes, its a matter of how big you grow your harem. right?
does the download still work with the itch.io app?
Sorry I meant it you still add one or if I have to download from the third party link now.
The game weighs over two gigabytes so I can't upload it to itch, unfortunately I can only through third party sites
salut, je pense que tu devrais faire une traduction française :)
Hi! I’m not planning a French translation just yet, but if I can find someone to help with it, maybe in the future!
Hey Dev, I just started playing ur game. Cuz it's giving me a vibe that it's gonna be awesome. The 1st look is so beautiful that I'm dying to try it. Bt after I just start playing it, I see there's a prblm u might wanna fix, that's why I'm writing it instead of playing. Add 'textbox transparency' in the game prefs. I'm saying that from my 3 years of experience of playing this type of game, and I bet it'll gonna enhance our playing experience and be less annoying while reading. So, many players are gonna try ur game. And if I find any prblm while playing the game, I'll let u know so u can fix it.
Bye Dev, thanks for reading my comment, and please fix those prblms in the future updates.
Thank you .☺️
Thanks for the heads-up! The new update is live in early access for Patreon supporters and will be available to everyone else tomorrow. I didn’t manage to fix the transparency issue with the text box this time, but I’ll make sure to address it in the next update.
Thanks for ur reply.
I've found another prblm and that is about the animation part..... I don't know about the pc version one cuz I didn't play it on my pc, bt in the android version sometime the animated part of the game get glitch and the animation didn't go smoothly. Like when the mc and patricia have sex at that time game get glitch idk if it's just my phone or the game, bt I cleared my phn ram and played it again and it still get glitched.
So, I kindly ask u to check if there's a prblm.
If u don't find any prblm then that is my fault, and I'm sorry for wasting ur time.
And if u find any prblm then I'll be really greatful if u can fix it.
Thank you
Thanks for the post! You’re probably right — I should look into lowering the quality of the animations and images for the Android version. It seems like the lag with the animations is definitely an issue. I’ll work on getting this fixed in the next updates. Appreciate you bringing it up!
U r most welcome, Happy to help☺️
There's a new update available! I’ve added a feature that lets you adjust the transparency of the textbox. Thanks for pointing that out! You can check out the new update now.
有中文翻译吗？
很遗憾，目前还没有翻译，也许将来我会考虑翻译，或者会有其他人愿意帮助翻译。
非常期待！
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
Not gonna lie i cant read the plot for the page the colors for the words is with the pick background is a no go :3
well played
Also I wanted to ask is there anyway to find the music used in this game? Some of the rock and metal tracks were pretty nice and I would like to know what they are called.
Aprreaciate the Help.
Most of the game's music is generated by a neural network, all music can be found in the game files ;)
Alright I have now finished the game and I must say, I totally understand all the support for this game. Especially for the developers first game it's fucking good. The jokes are on point and actually funny. The animations and Character models all look fantastic and there's also just so many nice details like references to other games or later on references to movies and it's all animated. Not just pictures but the developer actually put time to animate all of it. And I love it. The end for right now was super confusing and I don't really get why our character did it, I still feel like it was just his imagination but if not then we might be playing a psycho killer.
Thanks for your comment, it's a pleasure. There is a new update coming out soon (first for patreon subscribers), the animations are even better there in my opinion.
One thing I can complain about already is... WHY on Mega? I can already see how I have to download the files/updates from another website because Mega sucks ass and they want you to use their shitty app. Please if possible upload the updates to another platform that doesn't have a stupid low limit. It's gonna make things easyer in the future.
Is gdrive inconvenient for you too?
I think I have not used that yet because probably no one provides it. But the times when Mega didn't work because of the file size limit I went to other websites to download the file from there instead of using he stupid mega app. And often times they used Work upload, or Anomous files I think it was called and a bunch of other. And it always worked there doesn't really seem to be a size limit and u don't have to pay as user to download the files. I don't know it's your choice but I really dislike mega.
Also to everyone reading this add other Download websites if u want. I know I have used some other good ones aswell but I can't think of their name right now. Me stupid
Gdrive is very easy to download, give it a try, you might like it more than Mega.
I mean I'll give it a try if anyone ever uploads their file on there. But I have only once seen a developer use something else then Mega on itch. Usualy everyone just uses Mega.
have Chinese？？
I love this game, if there is no Chinese I can wait, and when the game adds Chinese I hope to have a hero to remind me
I may do a Chinese translation in the future, but it will be through an online translator, but I will try to make it as good as possible.
I'm looking forward to it, your game is very much in line with my sexual fetishes
your game is so good but my english is so bad
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
new update yuu yuu
yeah! very soon...
This game isnt in POV is it?
what's a POV?
Вид от первого лица. Если интересно, могу подсказать, как попроще снимать такие анимации.
Point of view, like a first person view in games. For people who do not like looking at a guys face.
I randomly stumbled upon this game and I am so glad that I did. I was worried about how you would introduce and develop the places outside the village, and I have to say you handled the transition really well.
I especially loved how you managed to convey the doubts and uncertainty of the MC when stepping out of his comfort zone.
Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much for your positive comment!
was this aviable for the itch.io app before? seems like I can't update it with the app even if it tells me it should work.
I can't answer that question for sure. I don't have the Itch app, but I had no complaints about it before your post.)
Then I probably remember it wrong
On the section labeled as "Download", the files do show the label "External". Games can be installed in-app if the files are uploaded to Itch.io rather than an external source such as MEGA.
both links are russian
for mega I mea
Thanks for mentioning that, I changed it
Is ntr planned for the future?(I hope not) But either way I still support your game
No, there is no NTR planned. We'll have a Harem with the girls on the banner. Thank you for your support.
Sharing/mmf??
I didn't understand the question
I think they are asking for 2 guys with 1 girl
Thanks for the explanation
No, it's not in the game right now. There is no such thing in the plans for now
Your game looks good
Yo, game dev! Don't let the negativity from NTR critics discourage you. Focus on creating the game you truly want to make. As long as you're putting in love, passion, and careful thought, the outcome will speak for itself. If you decide to include NTR in your game, just make sure it serves a meaningful purpose and isn't added for the sake of shock value.
I see potential in this project and I'm eager to see how it evolves. While I’ll wait for more improvements before playing it again, you have my support. I'll check back next year to see how things have progressed. Keep up the good work! 😁
Thank you for your support. The new update will be in a month, we don't have long to wait.
And yes NTR is not planned for the game. There will only be a Harem:)
Um is.secomd download in english
Having the only sex scene in the first release be watching the dad fuck is an interesting choice but other then that not bad
Выглядит довольно интересно. Не сказать что игра слишком детская, или наоборот серьёзная. Просто дружеская атмосфера у игры. В плане графики очень хорошо выглядит, что освещение, и тени хорошо сочитаются. Сам сюжет про деревенского паренька в городе тоже интересный. В общем жду продолжения...
Just played it and see potential! The Graphic is really good, animation are good and even thought some backgrounds are lower quality then the protagonist, it all fits well together.
Excited for next updates :)
Thanks :)
Hi :) mac version pls! Your renders look great, can't wait to try it
I don't have a macbook to test the game:(
I can test it for you if you want! oh and your discord invite link is expired
Thanks for saying about discord. Would you be comfortable downloading on the mega site?
https://mega.nz/file/WRJHFZhT#QXpqQd-LOWwvmxo6HQnDLtugX3smDdxIJdctoG8juZ4 I hope I'm not breaking itch rules. if I can't post links in the comments, please tell me so.
Ты вроде из России я изучаю русский язык смешивать гарем и нтр довольно плохая идея тебе придется делать практически две игры с равноценым содержанием и будет много говна лететь в твою сторону
Amalia(father's woman) will not be a sexual interest for MC. There will be no hints of incest in the game. Such content is blocked on Patreon. The harem will be with the girls shown on the page banner and in addition to them there will still be secondary women with whom the protagonist can have sex with if the player wishes.
Amalia legally could be an LI shes not blood related nor did you state she was married to your father all you've said is she was there for you guys.
I can change my plans. A great way to tell people not to support my game.
Hahaha, bye and thanks!
What future tags are you planning? Harem? ntr/sharing? Pregnancy? futa/trans? femdom?
Yes, I'm going to ask every time with these I and most other people want to know what the dev has planned.
Thank you for the question. There are plans for a harem in the future for now. The other tags you listed are not planned for now, but I may change my plans.
hmmm.. make an announcement when you absolutely rule out futa and NTR and then i might try the game.. i, like the majority of AVN players, are not here to be made mockery of.
nice renders, but content>renders