Hey man, i must say: this game got me invested in the whole story! You did a great job and is a great thing that you added a bit of revenge and fighting, plus, I loved the "Eternum" reference with the gameboard. Keep it up and you'll get me addicted!
Overall a great game, very good story and easy to understand.
only criticism i have is that sometime it feels like the character thinks too much, as in theres a ton to read for no reason, but then again it doesnt really matter since realistically speaking it is like that.
besides that the only other thing would be a way to be able to check the gallery from the in-game menu, and a way to check how your progress with each girl has changed, or at least like a mini bio of all the known girls so far, cause i noticed that a decision i made made a heart apear like letting me know it was a point to relationship with the girl but cant check anywhere if it is like that.
But Still , great game, and for a first game, id say perfect game, keep doing what your doing and dont overwork yourself .
interesting game, few typos with the scene with Amalia the line with "She could be on a beach holiday in Ibiza right now, not washing the clothes of a tomboy like me. But she chose my father, so maybe that is love." tomboy is a word for a girl so unless the mc is secretly a girl who is really good at acting like a boy it should just be boy. Another one with Liam is after the questions "MutuallyLiam, thanks for answering the questions" need a space after mutually. there is another one that I can't remember exactly where it is where Halit is spelled with a c. the game has a bit too many "mini-games" football for Americans is different from the rest of the world and throwing in mini games when it's going to end the same way is kind of waste of time. I'm not a big fan of Patricia and even intentionally picked things that I thought would make her not like me only to be force to screwing her was kind of annoying. Overall, I did enjoy the game although I do feel it's kind of drifting from one point to the other.
Thank you for your comment. In future updates, you will be given a choice before having sex with any of the girls. And you will be able to choose the option to not see the sex scene with Patricia again.
Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go
Okay...so...i triad...and i quit...sorry...but what the hell kinda stupid start is thst?! I was bired just reading it...mc is stupid talking about house age and hiw hes a nobody and has no girls and useing the bathroom on my time? The hell is wrong with you? You think i give a damn about his sorry loser boring ass? Okay its not that serious but you see where im going with this? You dont start a game by boring the player to the point of deleting the game...its so freaking boring!!! So yeah best of luck i guess i dont wanna go through that much time of boredom got way better games to play.
Hi! I don’t share your view that people living in rural areas are losers. But anyway, thanks for trying out the game. Have a great day and Happy New Year!
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped
Oof, because you are already at the ²-³ gig range on the apk I'll leave my usual post.
You probably want to cut some of the older content off as an RPA to download separately from the core apk with the newest content in it. This will allow only periodic rpa interaction from both you and from the android users, retaining the apk for the bulk of the updates.
Both methods stink and I've given up trying both because of those problems with every game. I bought this as part of the Winter Bundle, and I expect to be able to get it. Other developers seem to be capable of having it download straight from itch, do the same!
I enjoyed this game, at the start of the game I thought Charlie was gay, and I didn't like how he had muscles but from some angles he would look very skinny, but those problems quickly went away. I wasn't a big fan of Tony and Adam I believe, they looked weird. I love all the characters in the story, except Charlie, he's just the cliche Main Character that everyone gets along with even though he isn't doing anything special, throughout the game they act like he brightens the room when he seems really introverted to me. He doesn't have any special qualities besides being from a village, I didn't really see his charisma firsthand, but I can deal with it. I fell in love with the game the moment I saw Patricia, a beautiful character design and a woman I would date in real life. I hope there won't be too many 'Old Incompetent' men, since that seems to be a trend in AVN's as a way to make the protagonist shine, I assume, but overall, the story is okay and the plot is amazing to me.
Hi dev, I just played the new update and want tell you that I really enjoyed it but I would like to ask. Is ntr one of your plans?(I hope not) I just based it in the new update. I would just like to clarify before I commit fully to the game but either way I still hope for your game to be more successful
Hey Dev, I was just playing ur new update. And I find many problems so I decided to let u know what are those.
Like this, I was actually playing the game in english and this language suddenly came, and it's not the only time, u know there a new scene or image add in galary notification on the top left corner in this game, it also sometime change language.
Like this.
And sometimes the dialogue actually change bt the name doesn't.
Like in this scene the blonde girl actually talking bt it shows the mc's name.
There's some prblm like this, so if u kindly look into it.
Hey Dev, I just started playing ur game. Cuz it's giving me a vibe that it's gonna be awesome. The 1st look is so beautiful that I'm dying to try it. Bt after I just start playing it, I see there's a prblm u might wanna fix, that's why I'm writing it instead of playing. Add 'textbox transparency' in the game prefs. I'm saying that from my 3 years of experience of playing this type of game, and I bet it'll gonna enhance our playing experience and be less annoying while reading. So, many players are gonna try ur game. And if I find any prblm while playing the game, I'll let u know so u can fix it.
Bye Dev, thanks for reading my comment, and please fix those prblms in the future updates.
Thanks for the heads-up! The new update is live in early access for Patreon supporters and will be available to everyone else tomorrow. I didn’t manage to fix the transparency issue with the text box this time, but I’ll make sure to address it in the next update.
I've found another prblm and that is about the animation part..... I don't know about the pc version one cuz I didn't play it on my pc, bt in the android version sometime the animated part of the game get glitch and the animation didn't go smoothly. Like when the mc and patricia have sex at that time game get glitch idk if it's just my phone or the game, bt I cleared my phn ram and played it again and it still get glitched.
So, I kindly ask u to check if there's a prblm.
If u don't find any prblm then that is my fault, and I'm sorry for wasting ur time.
And if u find any prblm then I'll be really greatful if u can fix it.
Thanks for the post! You’re probably right — I should look into lowering the quality of the animations and images for the Android version. It seems like the lag with the animations is definitely an issue. I’ll work on getting this fixed in the next updates. Appreciate you bringing it up!
There's a new update available! I’ve added a feature that lets you adjust the transparency of the textbox. Thanks for pointing that out! You can check out the new update now.
Also I wanted to ask is there anyway to find the music used in this game? Some of the rock and metal tracks were pretty nice and I would like to know what they are called.
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just uploaded the Chinese version of Android. There has been no response to download it. I can't download it
try downloading through pixeldrain - https://pixeldrain.com/u/g8iA2b1G
Still no.
Chinese android game via pixeldrain has been downloaded at least 13 times. I checked, I can download it too. Try downloading through Mega
Hey man, i must say: this game got me invested in the whole story! You did a great job and is a great thing that you added a bit of revenge and fighting, plus, I loved the "Eternum" reference with the gameboard. Keep it up and you'll get me addicted!
thank you so much
Is this game story completed
no
sorry can you upload it to gdrive
Chinese
安卓
https://pixeldrain.com/u/g8iA2b1G
Thank you
：D
Does know how to download the game without using mega?
you can download from gdrive. Do you want to download the android version?
Both cannot be download to me, I am an Android user.
https://pixeldrain.com/u/UB1K3e4S
Thank you so much but I discovered this to you in the comments since yesterday "risking the spoiler" but it is worth it.
我也需要一个安卓中文的链接
我已经没有多余的钱去启动vpn了
https://pixeldrain.com/u/g8iA2b1G
WOW what a top tier game, i am shocked.
The story has a chill vibe and up until the end to this version very exciting. It just never gets boring.
I'll definitely have you under my radar now.
I'm expecting big things from this game and please stay healthy! Much love. =)
Thank you so much for your positive comment ❤️
I'm quite concerned about the horror tag, is it too scary?
No, it's not really scary. There's literally just one moment. I don't even think I should have added that tag.
I can't use mega and the link in GDrive doesn't work anymore. Is there a way I can play?
Why are you unable to download from gdrive?
It says something like "this link has been visited too many times" or something like that. I'm an Android user
https://pixeldrain.com/u/UB1K3e4S
Eternum referenceee!! NICEE
Overall a great game, very good story and easy to understand.
only criticism i have is that sometime it feels like the character thinks too much, as in theres a ton to read for no reason, but then again it doesnt really matter since realistically speaking it is like that.
besides that the only other thing would be a way to be able to check the gallery from the in-game menu, and a way to check how your progress with each girl has changed, or at least like a mini bio of all the known girls so far, cause i noticed that a decision i made made a heart apear like letting me know it was a point to relationship with the girl but cant check anywhere if it is like that.
But Still , great game, and for a first game, id say perfect game, keep doing what your doing and dont overwork yourself .
so yeah, LOVE THE GAME
Great game. Keep it up but don't overwork yourself.
很想游玩，可很多的中国手机不能使用你们的软件来下载，只可以用网页链接下载，可惜🥺🥺
为什么无法下载
点击此处下载
不是这个朋友，我下载的时候它会跳转到谷歌的渠道去，然后最后无法下载。
我点击下载的时候先是会跳转，然后慢慢的网络加载慢，最后显示是谷歌的网站无法下载。
尝试从 Mega 网站下载
不！！我面前有美味佳肴，但我无法享受它。我无法双击启动 DrivenByDesire！！我需要帮助
我不知道问题出在哪里。我刚刚检查并点击了 exe 文件，一切正常。
别担心，兄弟我解决了！
我需要更多!!哥们
interesting game, few typos with the scene with Amalia the line with "She could be on a beach holiday in Ibiza right now, not washing the clothes of a tomboy like me. But she chose my father, so maybe that is love." tomboy is a word for a girl so unless the mc is secretly a girl who is really good at acting like a boy it should just be boy. Another one with Liam is after the questions "MutuallyLiam, thanks for answering the questions" need a space after mutually. there is another one that I can't remember exactly where it is where Halit is spelled with a c. the game has a bit too many "mini-games" football for Americans is different from the rest of the world and throwing in mini games when it's going to end the same way is kind of waste of time. I'm not a big fan of Patricia and even intentionally picked things that I thought would make her not like me only to be force to screwing her was kind of annoying. Overall, I did enjoy the game although I do feel it's kind of drifting from one point to the other.
Thank you for your comment. In future updates, you will be given a choice before having sex with any of the girls. And you will be able to choose the option to not see the sex scene with Patricia again.
谢谢你，我的朋友，为中国玩家提供中文翻译。祝你的游戏越来越好!
非常感谢您的评论！
有中文吗？我的英语烂得像一坨狗屎
我正在翻译成中文。过几天就能翻译好，兄弟。翻译好了我给你发短信。
太感谢了！！！🤗
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
谢谢，我会的！！
The magic word is divorce or dad can just die and there are no problems with Patreon
As I understand it, there will be no 18+ content with the stepmother?
No, there won’t be any 18+ content with her.
will there be impregnation/pregnancy?
So far, there are no plans
I hope the mom is redesigned, she just does not look natural at all compared to the other characters
great game to play, hope to see more of it soon!
is there any consequences to your choices cause i slapped that bald guy but i wanna avoid any possible rape if thats in the game im hoping it isnt
there will be no rape in the game.
okay thank you
great game! keep it up dev!
Thanks so much for your comment and for playing the game❤️
Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go
Okay...so...i triad...and i quit...sorry...but what the hell kinda stupid start is thst?! I was bired just reading it...mc is stupid talking about house age and hiw hes a nobody and has no girls and useing the bathroom on my time? The hell is wrong with you? You think i give a damn about his sorry loser boring ass? Okay its not that serious but you see where im going with this? You dont start a game by boring the player to the point of deleting the game...its so freaking boring!!! So yeah best of luck i guess i dont wanna go through that much time of boredom got way better games to play.
Hi! I don’t share your view that people living in rural areas are losers. But anyway, thanks for trying out the game. Have a great day and Happy New Year!
He never said that,you're not getting the point of what he meant. Neither did I the grammar and over all english was shite lol. But what I'm getting from his rant is how you are molding the main character to sound like a little beta or loser. In retrospective he's kind of right make him relatable give him some more charm let him be an extension of yourself per se him whining about being a virgin and getting not girls does gets tiresome to some readers. Hope that helped
thank you! You summerised it perfectly and sorry not good at spelling English is my 2nd language
well I suggest powering through until chapter 2 it gets pretty good we get to know the main character better he's actually likeable in my opinion
alright I'll try
Oof, because you are already at the ²-³ gig range on the apk I'll leave my usual post.
You probably want to cut some of the older content off as an RPA to download separately from the core apk with the newest content in it. This will allow only periodic rpa interaction from both you and from the android users, retaining the apk for the bulk of the updates.
Amei o jogo tô esperando as próximas atualizações
have Chinese？
很遗憾，目前还没有翻译，也许将来我会考虑翻译，或者会有其他人愿意帮助翻译。
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
ok
你是一个很棒的作者，加油。
另外，这个游戏应该不会有ntr吧？
Ntr's not in the game
any chance you would do a mediafile download? google drive says no more downloads due to capacity and Mega capped at 1.9gbs before it closed out
Hi, did you want to download the PC version?
Yes, Im trying to download to pc
Both methods stink and I've given up trying both because of those problems with every game. I bought this as part of the Winter Bundle, and I expect to be able to get it. Other developers seem to be capable of having it download straight from itch, do the same!
I enjoyed this game, at the start of the game I thought Charlie was gay, and I didn't like how he had muscles but from some angles he would look very skinny, but those problems quickly went away. I wasn't a big fan of Tony and Adam I believe, they looked weird. I love all the characters in the story, except Charlie, he's just the cliche Main Character that everyone gets along with even though he isn't doing anything special, throughout the game they act like he brightens the room when he seems really introverted to me. He doesn't have any special qualities besides being from a village, I didn't really see his charisma firsthand, but I can deal with it. I fell in love with the game the moment I saw Patricia, a beautiful character design and a woman I would date in real life. I hope there won't be too many 'Old Incompetent' men, since that seems to be a trend in AVN's as a way to make the protagonist shine, I assume, but overall, the story is okay and the plot is amazing to me.
Thank you so much. Have a great day!
Hi dev, I just played the new update and want tell you that I really enjoyed it but I would like to ask. Is ntr one of your plans?(I hope not) I just based it in the new update. I would just like to clarify before I commit fully to the game but either way I still hope for your game to be more successful
Hi! Thanks so much for deciding to play my game. And no, I’m not planning to include NTR at all
I'm glad. I'll fully support this game now. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update
Hey Dev, I was just playing ur new update. And I find many problems so I decided to let u know what are those.
Like this, I was actually playing the game in english and this language suddenly came, and it's not the only time, u know there a new scene or image add in galary notification on the top left corner in this game, it also sometime change language.
Like this.
And sometimes the dialogue actually change bt the name doesn't.
Like in this scene the blonde girl actually talking bt it shows the mc's name.
There's some prblm like this, so if u kindly look into it.
Thank you very much, I will fix it soon
will harem be avoidable? i prefer li path choices. also will pregnancy be involved eventually?
It will be possible to avoid relationships with some girls. No pregnancy is planned
so your saying only some are avoidable so its not a matter of solo multiple choice LI routes, its a matter of how big you grow your harem. right?
does the download still work with the itch.io app?
Sorry I meant it you still add one or if I have to download from the third party link now.
The game weighs over two gigabytes so I can't upload it to itch, unfortunately I can only through third party sites
salut, je pense que tu devrais faire une traduction française :)
Hi! I’m not planning a French translation just yet, but if I can find someone to help with it, maybe in the future!
Hey Dev, I just started playing ur game. Cuz it's giving me a vibe that it's gonna be awesome. The 1st look is so beautiful that I'm dying to try it. Bt after I just start playing it, I see there's a prblm u might wanna fix, that's why I'm writing it instead of playing. Add 'textbox transparency' in the game prefs. I'm saying that from my 3 years of experience of playing this type of game, and I bet it'll gonna enhance our playing experience and be less annoying while reading. So, many players are gonna try ur game. And if I find any prblm while playing the game, I'll let u know so u can fix it.
Bye Dev, thanks for reading my comment, and please fix those prblms in the future updates.
Thank you .☺️
Thanks for the heads-up! The new update is live in early access for Patreon supporters and will be available to everyone else tomorrow. I didn’t manage to fix the transparency issue with the text box this time, but I’ll make sure to address it in the next update.
Thanks for ur reply.
I've found another prblm and that is about the animation part..... I don't know about the pc version one cuz I didn't play it on my pc, bt in the android version sometime the animated part of the game get glitch and the animation didn't go smoothly. Like when the mc and patricia have sex at that time game get glitch idk if it's just my phone or the game, bt I cleared my phn ram and played it again and it still get glitched.
So, I kindly ask u to check if there's a prblm.
If u don't find any prblm then that is my fault, and I'm sorry for wasting ur time.
And if u find any prblm then I'll be really greatful if u can fix it.
Thank you
Thanks for the post! You’re probably right — I should look into lowering the quality of the animations and images for the Android version. It seems like the lag with the animations is definitely an issue. I’ll work on getting this fixed in the next updates. Appreciate you bringing it up!
U r most welcome, Happy to help☺️
There's a new update available! I’ve added a feature that lets you adjust the transparency of the textbox. Thanks for pointing that out! You can check out the new update now.
有中文翻译吗？
很遗憾，目前还没有翻译，也许将来我会考虑翻译，或者会有其他人愿意帮助翻译。
非常期待！
中文译本已准备就绪，您现在可以下载！祝您游戏愉快！如果喜欢这款游戏，欢迎向您的中国朋友推荐，非常感谢您的支持！
Not gonna lie i cant read the plot for the page the colors for the words is with the pick background is a no go :3
well played
Also I wanted to ask is there anyway to find the music used in this game? Some of the rock and metal tracks were pretty nice and I would like to know what they are called.
Aprreaciate the Help.
Most of the game's music is generated by a neural network, all music can be found in the game files ;)